Is it worth to have hope for a dream that might never come true? In our society people live from dreams, dreams that no matter the situation will always be a priority. But even if the desire to fulfill those dreams that are there in your soul and mind, not everyone has the opportunity or luck to make them true. Reality hits us everyday, and in a place such as Harlem, a very poor area in New York City where a community of African Americans live, this must be a thing they experience every single day. In Langston Hudge's poem, Harlem, he uses a series of rhetorical questions, which mainly ask the reader, "What happens to a dream deferred?" followed by questions that answer the first one. Hudges' tells us that that if a dream is delayed, it will dry up and become so little to be noticed anymore, or if the dream stays like a fester sore, hurting you permanently, getting what is best of you and creeping inside you until only pain remains. Or if it stinks like a rotten meat, a dream that a person starts to hate, because there is no hope for it, a dream that makes a person uncomfortable and unhappy because it is out of reach. But then Hudges' gives us a totally different image of what he had created before. He asks, "Or crust and sugar over like a syrupy sweet?" which in my case left me thinking that it was only a method to make the reader forget the disturbing images already made about a dream delayed. A dream deferred cannot be sweet, not even if that dream has lost its' meaning and does not matter anymore. Then Hudges' creates a depressing resigned tone when he says, "Maybe it just sags like a heavy load." which indicates that the dream that so much a person wanted to make true but never becomes a reality stays with them forever, making it harder to breathe, remaining like a heavy load in their shoulders as a reminder that it is still there, even if it will never be more than that; a heavy dream. Finally, Hudges' asks us, "Or does it explode?". The dream will either explode to make the person more miserable, or that person will explode in realization that he or she have to do everything in their power to make of that dream a reality. The tone changes throughout the poem, it goes from desperation, to resignation, to wonder. The similes used create images, that make us look at a dream in a different way, since a dream is not actually a thing , the author gives us examples of how would it feel to have a desired dream and not being able to make it true.
Friday, January 22, 2010
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Beautiful writing! I found joy in reading your critical analysis as much I enjoy having warm cookies and cold milk in the early morning. You dissected the poem very well; question by question,and piece by piece, you provided a logical explanation how each fragment successfully links together to create a beautiful poem like "A Dream Deferred".
ReplyDeleteI agree with your analysis. However, near the end you said "the dream will explode to make the person more miserable, or that person will explode in realization that he or she have to do something in their power to make that dream a reality", I think this last part is a little bit off or not sufficiently crystal clear for readers like myself to further enjoy your masterful creation. In my opinion, the word "explode" creates a powerful negative image; beside making "the person" more miserable, it also negatively affects the surrounding and people within that surrounding. Overall, your analysis flows very well. You have a job well done!
Excellent job analyzing each question and pointing out important sections of the poem. Also a great opening because, it helps relate everyday dreams to this poem. I also like that you pointed out that the significance of the title. The last few sentences about tones and similes probably should have been in the middle rather than the end, but they are fine where they are. Overall it is simple and gets right to the point, great job.
ReplyDeleteYour blog was great in connecting how each simile used in the poem relates to each other. I like the fact that you went very detailed in explaining each simile and what they stand for regarding a dream deferred. I also think that last part of your blog where you talked about the tone of the poem should have been introduced earlier in the poem. Overall your analysis of each simile and what they stand for was done really well.
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