Poem Thesis Statement: "Fire and Ice" - Robert Frost
Frost favoring the world to end in fire instead of ice shows the importance emotion plays in the poem, because if it ended in ice all feeling would be frozen.
You've asserted a clear position on the issue that will be argued if you were to write an essay on it. Your thesis is augmentative and specific enough.
The idea behind your thesis is good but I feel it might be a bit lengthy. In the middle of it you have that "because" statement. I feel that if you somehow shortened the thesis by omitting the "because" the these would be much stronger.
You've asserted a clear position on the issue that will be argued if you were to write an essay on it. Your thesis is augmentative and specific enough.
ReplyDeleteThe idea behind your thesis is good but I feel it might be a bit lengthy. In the middle of it you have that "because" statement. I feel that if you somehow shortened the thesis by omitting the "because" the these would be much stronger.
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